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Monday, November 5, 2018

Te kauru 2018 camp writing-(writing 2nd draft)



  The log floom!

The log floom was the best. Tai,Oscar,and I were on one log I was giving them a tor around it.(So here's the pixies king he stole all the gold from the other pixies!)Tai Oscar and I went four times on the log flown.It’s scary because when u go down a steep hill to end the ride u (somehow don’t have a sit belt,so u fall forward a bit and get splashed.)I had a fun time at the Jump,the zoo,and the pools.But RAINBOWS END!



7 comments:

  1. hi lochie hope you hade a great time at rainbows end

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  2. Good one lochie just try to not use to much names or you can put friends, but that was some good writing lochie.

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  3. i really enjoyed reading your peace of writing and looking at those pics i felt like i was in the log flume what was your favorite ride mine was probably the fear fall and the roller coaster nice one lochie

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