The swamp!

 This is a quick google slide animation i did at school.

The slide is based on a picture from https://www.pobble365.com/ which is a really good writing site.

 

Describing a Moment in Time

I am working on elaborating on my writing to improve my paragraphs. I am working on being a L4 writer.



I enjoyed describing the Elephant picture because it reminds me every time my family and I go for walks.

Mothers Day Writing:

I enjoyed making this slide because its all about my Mum and today's Mothers Day and I wanted to describe my Mum about what she looks like,what she doesn't like,what she likes and what we do together.

MY IMAGINARY ANIMAL:THE TINKEY

I enjoyed describing a made up animal. I thought of the Tinkey. I described the Tinkey and added detail like where it lives, eats and what it looks like.

MURIWHENUA TANGA - The Tribes of Muriwhenua

WALT - research and collate information about the tribes of Muriwhenua.

I have been researching lots about the tribes' rohe, Pepeha, Waiata and where their names came from.  Have a look at my research by clicking on the slides.



I enjoyed doing this because I learnt so much stuff I didn't know about. What I found tricky was finding some of the information on the internet because there was a lot to read.

ANZAC WW1-WW2 SLIDE:

WALT:

About World War history and learning about my family connection from WW1 and WW2.

I was learning about my family in the war and learning about stuff that I didn't even know.
I went for a family walk and all I was talking about was telling my Mum and Dad facts I learned that day.
For ANZAC my family and I are going to wake up at dawn to commemorate the soldiers who fought for the nation.

IF I WAS THE PRIME MINISTER OF NEW ZEALAND!

I'm learning to write quality paragraphs using the PEE writing model.

P:oint-idea

E:laboration-add detail

E:xample

I chose to write about what I would do if I was Prime Minister of NZ.

First I had to do my planning:

Then I did my draft writing:

Lastly I created a google slide: