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I chose to write about what I would do if I was Prime Minister of NZ.
I chose to write about what I would do if I was Prime Minister of NZ.
First I had to do my planning:
Then I did my draft writing:
Lastly I created a google slide:
HI Lochie, I really like your presentation. You make some very good points in your slide. Education, housing and taxes good for you. I love how you have shown your thought process by using drafts and then pulling it all together with you slide. I will be watching your progress with great interest. I will certainly vote for you.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Lochie!!!
ReplyDeleteWoah awesome mahi! I love how you've done your slides. I would so vote for you as Prime Minister, New Zealand would be a much better country with all the key points you have highlighted!
Aē tautoko your kōrero regarding your class furniture! Oh my gosh, they are older then Whaea Brenda! Shush, don't tell her that though hahaha. Maybe you should start a petition for new furniture? Get the whole school to sign it, students and teachers, and give it to Tā when we all go back to school? Just a thought :)
Keep up your awesome mahi Lochie!
Nga mihi
Whaea G.