I am a Year 8 student at Kaitaia Intermediate School School in Northland, New Zealand. Whaea Margo is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at KIS. I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
I really enjoyed reading your descriptive writing Lochie. You have used so many descriptive words to create an image in the readers mind. Words like soared, flew, echoing, razor sharp really create such a vivid image in my mind of what your diver is looking at. Keep up the great work!!!
I really enjoyed reading your descriptive writing Lochie. You have used so many descriptive words to create an image in the readers mind. Words like soared, flew, echoing, razor sharp really create such a vivid image in my mind of what your diver is looking at. Keep up the great work!!!
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