Describing a Moment in Time

I am working on elaborating on my writing to improve my paragraphs. I am working on being a L4 writer.



I enjoyed describing the Elephant picture because it reminds me every time my family and I go for walks.

Mothers Day Writing:

I enjoyed making this slide because its all about my Mum and today's Mothers Day and I wanted to describe my Mum about what she looks like,what she doesn't like,what she likes and what we do together.

MY IMAGINARY ANIMAL:THE TINKEY

I enjoyed describing a made up animal. I thought of the Tinkey. I described the Tinkey and added detail like where it lives, eats and what it looks like.

MURIWHENUA TANGA - The Tribes of Muriwhenua

WALT - research and collate information about the tribes of Muriwhenua.

I have been researching lots about the tribes' rohe, Pepeha, Waiata and where their names came from.  Have a look at my research by clicking on the slides.



I enjoyed doing this because I learnt so much stuff I didn't know about. What I found tricky was finding some of the information on the internet because there was a lot to read.